tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post4210481708900461026..comments2023-10-17T08:16:35.305-04:00Comments on That's Why: Short Story: Bad Lucklisahgoldenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11158660223296807317noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-21470996856032273422010-07-16T23:24:14.057-04:002010-07-16T23:24:14.057-04:00I loved this story!! You are sooo talented at dev...I loved this story!! You are sooo talented at developing characters, Lisa. :)Miss Healthypantshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02388211920649065327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-35472669973557219062010-07-15T23:24:33.320-04:002010-07-15T23:24:33.320-04:00It really is a good piece.
Regards,
Tengrain
PS...It really is a good piece.<br /><br />Regards,<br /><br />Tengrain<br /><br />PS - thanks for the shout out.Tengrainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00171857054812345617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-4115467584843571802010-07-15T14:48:01.393-04:002010-07-15T14:48:01.393-04:00Can't wait for the next chapter!Can't wait for the next chapter!kkrynohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07727264476742817993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-74355277734026942202010-07-15T12:54:19.834-04:002010-07-15T12:54:19.834-04:00Great story! I want more!Great story! I want more!Markhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08237538988856751173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-49847738532786717632010-07-15T09:49:22.605-04:002010-07-15T09:49:22.605-04:00Wow. That was awesome. More please.Wow. That was awesome. More please.Heather Jefferieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05590391262194548880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-77008144489084382212010-07-15T06:09:06.325-04:002010-07-15T06:09:06.325-04:00Lisa, I read all your posts and never comment. I n...Lisa, I read all your posts and never comment. I never know what to say. I love them all so much. Your writing style grabs me at hello and I just want to read more. Excellent short story. That book is SO there and I can't wait to read it.Delana@dujourhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09319475424591739125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-48601014510200098532010-07-15T06:08:18.134-04:002010-07-15T06:08:18.134-04:00Lisa, I read all your posts and never comment. I n...Lisa, I read all your posts and never comment. I never know what to say. I love them all so much. Your writing style grabs me at hello and I just want to read more. Excellent short story. That book is SO there and I can't wait to read it.Delana@dujourhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09319475424591739125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-85466256298823401602010-07-15T05:36:55.858-04:002010-07-15T05:36:55.858-04:00This was excellent! I loved it. I think you reall...This was excellent! I loved it. I think you really should compile your short stories and publish them!Mauigirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15529827915262851910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-3449683650495103322010-07-14T23:23:00.835-04:002010-07-14T23:23:00.835-04:00Thanks, you guys. These short stories are sometim...Thanks, you guys. These short stories are sometimes writing practice, sometimes I ideas I'm thinking of expanding. I really appreciate your feedback. Heck, it's all positive, who wouldn't appreciate it?lisahgoldenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11158660223296807317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-48332619090690345142010-07-14T21:08:30.403-04:002010-07-14T21:08:30.403-04:00when you got it
flaunt it
so you go girl!
:)when you got it<br />flaunt it<br />so you go girl!<br />:)Life As I Know It Nowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03733963455243806298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-92123448936690491032010-07-14T20:36:31.497-04:002010-07-14T20:36:31.497-04:00That's good! Are you attempting to write enoug...That's good! Are you attempting to write enough short stories for a collection or are you submitting individual stories for magazines?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17296223961815248113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-91352559324133231422010-07-14T20:16:51.939-04:002010-07-14T20:16:51.939-04:00Very, very nicely done. When you play to your stre...Very, very nicely done. When you play to your strengths you write like a professional.susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16747450215034568033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-9885325675330152412010-07-14T19:39:33.260-04:002010-07-14T19:39:33.260-04:00Yes, send it out, please! I wish to read more sho...Yes, send it out, please! I wish to read more short stories of this quality. I do like it a lot, Lisa, especially how the title and opening line work their way in sinister fashion all through the piece. <br /><br />Bad luck, all around -- except for the reader. :)Meredithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11454557080455458675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-41254397907916715662010-07-14T18:02:04.308-04:002010-07-14T18:02:04.308-04:00WOW! That was like a small chapter from a good bo...WOW! That was like a small chapter from a good book. For what it's worth, I liked it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09986167130467258392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-91961143306709034472010-07-14T16:30:55.991-04:002010-07-14T16:30:55.991-04:00You should be feeling lucky and you should send th...You should be feeling lucky and you should send this out. Really good. I adore all the details.La Belette Rougehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05686717070120116918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-40066194899276157222010-07-14T15:03:22.515-04:002010-07-14T15:03:22.515-04:00Lisa, I love this.Lisa, I love this.Lemon Gloriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07280085058516960260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-52189796019286923052010-07-14T14:12:18.075-04:002010-07-14T14:12:18.075-04:00Heathers, the sequel?Heathers, the sequel?Randal Graveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08728992897551848531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-57736188479114551082010-07-14T12:35:07.375-04:002010-07-14T12:35:07.375-04:00This is really good, Lisa!This is really good, Lisa!Wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14574959237959082661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3221819058568684886.post-73745466281623117492010-07-14T11:58:17.152-04:002010-07-14T11:58:17.152-04:00Thanks to Tengrain for his editing assistance on t...Thanks to Tengrain for his editing assistance on this story!lisahgoldenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11158660223296807317noreply@blogger.com